Thursday, October 1, 2009

Weekly Story Writer's

Weekly Story Writer's
The first story that I'm going to start with is mine and this story was made for english in 7th grade C track teacher Ms. Schooler. For all you 6th graders out there so you know what you are going to expect in honors.

Mystery of Murder
The room was crowded and as the body lay in the middle of the floor with a broken alcohol bottle next to the pale white body. The police officers talked to the neighbors to try to get the story straight while forensic scientist look for clues and dust things for fingerprints from the suspect. The room around them was rather piggish from the victim and shows signs of depression, but along with it were some knocked over chairs and some overurned tables. Strange enough there was a mini bar in the living room where the body was found. That also menas the victim and the suspect put up a bit of a fight against each other. The body lay spwaled out in the floor. Bullet wound in the chest and a cable around the neck which should indicate strangulation. The victim looked to about 5'6 in his early 30's with highlights and cold blue eyes. Then they began chalking the body to take for an autopsy to see if anything else killed him before or after he was shot. The best officer on the force Richard Jamison Then noticed something but it wasnt just anything it was..............TO BE CONTINUED
I will post the rest of the story next week if you think you liked the story.

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